1)
It was the 27th January of 1987, late at night
At my birth, the doctors looking that is alright
A little bit later I was born, I was a torn
Look in my eyes; I was another, another as my parents
Another as my friends, that nobody wants holding my hands
Ten years later I was in the 3rd Class of primary school
Everyone thinks he’s cool, but everyone there is a fool
Every boy try to tease me, I cried out that every one freezes me
Keep the Faith that every teacher thinks that I’m silly
That wasn’t true; the next time to grow up wasn’t easily
It was more as you and I can say that was measuredly
The special school believed that she’s more beautifully
More than that, more than facts, they was really crazy
All the time I was better as the special school level (all are lazy)
These two years, I try it to forget, that was really evil
In the secondary modern school to concern tried I hard
Nevertheless I got all back; everything around me was getting dark
I try it to end that school, to get on a new way to find who I am
In the End it was really bad I can’t find a way, what should I do then
In this school I had a dream to go to a drama school, I could pray
For that, but everyone was laughing at me, that I couldn’t find the way
To my dream, to my goal, the next step was the middle school
Oh my god full of friends and enemies, I thought I was a fool
I had in natural sciences always a good mark, I try to keep smiling
But this try was so hard, I couldn’t trying to lie, in my own thing
Now I had a feeling that’s strange, I can’t rearrange
I think that isn’t a Love, that’s higher It’s going above


REF:
Can you feel the same, I can’t change it
There’s a flame, more than love a little bit
I think that’s about you and me
We could be soul-mates
The fact that it nobody can see
I do not know on which it relates
We try to find the answer
We looked all the time everywhere
That’s not fair, that’s not fair


2)
You’re rich, famous and beautiful
I’d be the same, notorious and cool
Hope you’ll know me better as you want
We’re seekers; truth to find is that what we can’t
World is like a creek, every time I can write you an letter
People are people, but with the money you’re better
Oh no, I know you work is hard, but our planet falls apart
I know I’m only a fan in the world far away, but here’s too dark
I can’t see you, Try to sing “Seluprete Style” to be on light, fuck
Nothing will happen, I wannabe near you, don’t know what’ve to do
My Soul is black but I want that you sing a song with me, that’s true
I could be a fool like the Hero “Scream”, to sing a song with you that’s dream
Every time I listen to your voice, but to sing with me is your own choice
Do you know what would happen if you don’t agree, Sing with me
This desire overpowers me like only one virus can be
It’s hard too stay here for a long time to pass this sea
I have to come to California, Westside State
Hope find you soon to do this, there’s more that I can’t wait
Everyone in our state thinks so that to meet you is so easily
If I End my mission to see in your eyes to begin to sing that’s pearly
I have no fear to change myself to a right gent
But my Faith is that what I believe and that what I defend
My new Single with your voice on it, I’ve listen to it
For a long time, I feel your voice deeply in myself,
She touches me so deeply goes – and thyself
More than you – more than me – what music can be?
And listen to us, with trust, so long you can see me

3)
Soul-mates
You and me
Nobody couldn’t relates
This personal History
It’s not easily
To be you or to be me
And praise my own voice
But that’s your choice

hey,
also ich wollte zunächst mit ein paar korrekturvorschlägen aufwarten ... bis mir dann auffiel, dass in so gut wie jedem satz grammatikalisches chaos herrscht, was es sehr schwer macht, überhaubt nachvollziehen zu können, wo,s genau hingehen soll und welcher satz sich auf welche person / welches ereignis bezieht oder auch nicht ... die fragmente die nachvollziehbar und eindeutig zu verstehen sind , sind recht oberflächlich verfasst und rappeln mehr eine art lebensgeschichte runter, die wohl traurig rüberkommen soll, aber auf diese art und weise geschrieben nur flach und langweilig wirkt ...
ich weiss, es ist immer hart sowas an den kopf geworfen zu bekommen, wenn man doch über dinge schreibt, die einem sehr wichtig sind und die man auch als dringend und wichtig verstanden wissen möchte ... ich hab dennoch versucht, das ganze objektiv zu betrachten und das da oben ist mein eindruck dazu ... ein tip: vllt. solltest du dich zunächst mit dem schreiben in deiner muttersprache beschäftigen und dich erst ans englische wagen, wenn du dich ausreichend damit befasst hast ...

LG jörn